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tell me when
tell me why
just one word
a simple lie

Tell me what
tell me who
just one word
you had to use

You say one thin
and mean another
what is the truth
how do you feel

tell me its true
and i'll try
living in wonder then a lie
shut up with talking its going nowhere
tell me you love me and i'll give you anything
all i want is some ones love
not hatred thats too late
to save

tell me the truth
not a lie
©2007-2009 ~Thanatos-Freyer
:iconthanatos-freyer:

Author's Comments

this is a very old poem, like from 2002 wow i was young, bloody puberty grr lol

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:iconblood-phoenix:
Amazing poem =D

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Because feathers and beaks are smexy :3 Shake your feathers and bop your beak
:iconthanatos-freyer:
Really? some lines are a bit iffy but some are ok, ty you make me belive in myself
xxxxxxx
:iconblood-phoenix:
you should your a really good writer ^^

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Because feathers and beaks are smexy :3 Shake your feathers and bop your beak
:iconthanatos-freyer:
ty, i'll keep writing, i have a good muse and insperation. you xxxxxxx
:iconblood-phoenix:
^-^ I know you could do it even without me

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Because feathers and beaks are smexy :3 Shake your feathers and bop your beak
:iconthanatos-freyer:
dont say that
i dont want to be without u, ur my soul mate
:iconblood-phoenix:
^^

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Because feathers and beaks are smexy :3 Shake your feathers and bop your beak

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